I loved your first story even though it is bit unrealistic and hope it was not the last one. Will be checking your profile regularly...
I liked the story, but felt it needed a little bit of proof reading before submitting. Keep it up though. Definitely a chance for a sequel there.
Hey guys thanks for the positive feedback, going to try my best to apply to other stories.
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Loved it
I loved your first story even though it is bit unrealistic and hope it was not the last one. Will be checking your profile regularly...
It was ok
I liked the story, but felt it needed a little bit of proof reading before submitting. Keep it up though. Definitely a chance for a sequel there.
Thanks
Hey guys thanks for the positive feedback, going to try my best to apply to other stories.
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