All Comments on 'Unprepared for Master'

Well written. Her POV was good for this. The dialogue and descriptions were clear and simple in the best way. There was no over blown action. No all caps yelling and multiple exclamation points. Perfect sensibility for a firm, but caring and respectful Dom. What a lucky little sub. I look forward to more from you.

Not to my taste personally. She intentionally defied her Masters orders but yet was still "pampered" she definitely didn't deserve it. She was only punished by getting spanked with his hand but yet she was still crying about how it hurt. She is a bad slave and needs to be reminded of her place. I know that my Master would never tolerate this. I would never dare do what she did. Masters orders are paramount no matter what.