Chapter one was like foreplay, setting me on high alert for what is to follow. Love your writing SJP...
keep it going its hot just keepit sexy and the same stile of writing as chapter 1 your loving leann xxx
Loved the way you alerted the reader in the beginning of the girl friend's fantasy and then confirmed it in the end.
Another great start to an always interesting storyline from a great author!! Looking forward to many more chapters
to what promises to be an even greater story.
Thank you Susan for a story that not only appeals to my own fantasy , but also has the making of another blockbuster , cannot wait until i get to the current chapter to find out where it goes
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Foreplay
Chapter one was like foreplay, setting me on high alert for what is to follow. Love your writing SJP...
grate starte
keep it going its hot just keepit sexy and the same stile of writing as chapter 1 your loving leann xxx
perfect ending to chapter 1.
Loved the way you alerted the reader in the beginning of the girl friend's fantasy and then confirmed it in the end.
Nice Start
Another great start to an always interesting storyline from a great author!! Looking forward to many more chapters
Great start,
to what promises to be an even greater story.
What a start
Thank you Susan for a story that not only appeals to my own fantasy , but also has the making of another blockbuster , cannot wait until i get to the current chapter to find out where it goes
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