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BabySitter's Present

byAshson©
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by Anonymous

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by betrayedbylove07/22/13

Huh?

Why am I making the first comment? Okay, he goes.
The wife must be an alcoholic. To not remember giving her husband to the nineteen year old babysitter is preposterous.
To rate this I have to be sane so I'm just going to be neutral.

Insanity prevails.

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by Anonymous07/22/13

humor

Should have been featured under humor.

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by SparksWillFly07/22/13

OK I Am a Hypocrite

I have said in comments I don't like your wife sharing stories and, lo and behold, you write a husband sharing story. You got me good.

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by thebuffalo07/22/13

I found it a bit more humorous than erotic. It is well enough written, but the characters come across, (to me), as rather superficial and not well developed.

"Wedding tackle?" That is a new one on me.

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by Lickideesplit07/23/13

Before

Before I could tell him I wasn't THAT kind of girl, I WAS!

My least favorite out of a passel of winners!

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by Anonymous07/28/13

Not bad, but.........

This was ok, but the actual sex could have been much longer and more descriptive. If you do that then I will definitely be looking forward to seeing what Tony does with Karen away from his wife in the future.

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by unicorn6410/23/13

I thought they said Tony was going to teach her. There was no foreplay building her up for her fist time, I'm sorry but this was more rape than teaching her anything. There was no intimacy at all. Wham am thank you man. I could not give five stars.

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by Anonymous06/13/14

Ending hints towards a follow up

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