A Almost Perfect Awakening Ch. 50

this sex, this sex!

this is incredibly sexy. i feel like wanting some cock in my ass, now that I have read this.

Ohhh God this made me Ache

Outstanding piece of writing...must have been based on fact to sound so grounded and real... had me wriggling on my seat for sure. Thankyou....

I don't see how this fits under mind control because there was none of that but was still enjoyable and fit the story as well as the rest of the chapters thus far

bad chapter

there's nothing interesting or exciting about the details of a fixed party game whose outcome was obvious from the get -go.. it's just boring.

"teats" are for udders

after 50 chapters I have accumulated enough aggravation over the word "teats" referring to human mammalia. maybe in a biology text naming what animals use to feed their infants, but in a stroke story?? also compare "to" & "too".
generally good action, if a little repetitive. it's not a novel just because you add more people doing the same thing.

Wonderful

Just love this series