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I am hoping that there is more to this
Really enjoyed it, but would have loved it to be longer
Problem.
This has no right to be just one page. It was still a good read and well worth posting it. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
To Readers
There are more chapters to come. I've also refined Ch. 01 to allow for a better transition.
All anonymous comments will be deleted (whether good or bad).
I want to keep a fairly accurate count of readers that leave comments. This is just a personal preference.
Thanks.
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To the troll: "fairly accurate"
If there are 5 anonymous comments, it could be that any number of readers up to 5 have left those comments.
To the other readers:
Chapter 02 is on the way. I revised chapter one, but the old version was never replaced. Not sure what to do about that.
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