A Pack of Tales Ch. 10

what happens next?

I always think I know what will happen next - but it never does. Lol. Keep on going keeping on going. Please?

that was sad poor red

Poor Red

I know, I felt very grumpy having to write such horrible things for poor Red. Unfortunately it had to be something major that would lead to her ending up in the state she was in when the pack took her in. I'm sure Christa is giving her a lot of hugs now (and cups of tea).
Bad things often happen to young people, I wish it was a better world. I'm glad Red has found some good friends though, people who are worth her trust (even if they can be a bit hairy sometimes ;) ).

keep going!

I love how your characters are slowly revealed in their multiple facets.

any more please??

I keep on looking but nothing new - have you finished with this story, or is there more to come please??(please???)

Confused

I like the story, but you're writing is kind of all over the place. I'm guessing you're trying to go for an artistic approach but it's not effective if no one knows what's happening. Also, many scenes seem random and not needed.