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Gavin Screws Up Ch. 02

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by Anonymous07/27/13

Need Help

You really have gone for the punch line without giving us enough background to understand what is going on here. We need help.

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by GemmaRaphael07/27/13

Thanks for the feedback

Thanks for letting me know about lack of background. It's my first attempt so that's something really useful for me to keep in mind. Did you see the first one in the series? It probably jumps in abruptly too, but just checking you're not missing the first part.

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