All Comments on 'Ellie Lost a Bet at a Party'

Like 'A Very Naked Interview', this would have benefited from some background, maybe a flashback to how she came to make this bet in the first place.

This was just part of a story - why was the character submitting to this humiliation?

And, of course, there was the usual nonsense of humiliation being unbelievably arousing.

The two stories submitted without backstories are just quick stories for people who have their own idea of the girl involved, that way the reader can imagine the kind of girl they want. The reader can imagine the girl with any hair colour, any features they might like, and of course how they got into the situation they're in. Like I said though, these two stories are just quick stories while I'm beginning my first series of stories.

good story but the we needed to know how she lost the bet, and why Riri had such a crush or hatred for her. What happened next was she blackmailed by the entire dorm? Few people would go to this extend to settle a bet, very arousing story though.

But no build up, no explanation of who the characters are or why one has to get naked and humiliated.