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Sperm Wars: Return of the Jism

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by jasonnmonica07/24/13

The Better man.

I have been wonder if Melina will ever figure out who the better man is? Or at least tell her husband the truth about who she thinks is the better man. When will she tell her husband the truth. I mean just tell him the reason you won't let him cum inside her so that he can finally be freed from this apparently shallow bitch.

Whats next?

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by johnstang208/20/13

This story is turning sad

At first I thought it was hot and the original was.

But thru all that one fact remained, Melina never forgot about her husband. But now all she thinks about is Todd especially on what was supposed to be the most romantic evening for them.

Melina says she does not want Ned and Elizabeth to win but she does not realize that she is playing into Elizabeth's hands. She got pregnant with Todd and not with her husband (Elizabeth's bastard brother). What is even worse is that she is slowly forgetting about her husband.

I hope she wakes up soon and realizes what she is throwing away. I hope the husband can tell Melina exactly what he has been feeling. I hope on day Todd realizes he is still being used.

This really is becoming a tragedy.

John

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