All Comments on 'Controlling Bobbi - AR Ch. 01'

by Cletis

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YediYediover 10 years ago
cool

A interesting variation could be longer though

reopainreopainover 10 years ago
Nice

This is a nice extension of Controlling Bobbi and yet takes a different direction than the original. Great job and i hope you continue the alternate reality arc.

zena99zena99over 10 years ago
So far okay

I only gave a 4 as it is only a set up. But it is very promising.

CletisCletisover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Hi everyone. Thanks for the feedback. I am working on part 2 right now. It is already a little longer. Sorry for those of you who want all chapters to be longer. I just let them go where they will and hope they are at least 5 pages in the word processor. Hope you all enjoy the chapters that are to follow.

ArtyGeeArtyGeeover 10 years ago
Good Job

Cletis

Thanks again for discussing this idea with me. It's not where I was going, but it is really interesting and I'm sure readers will enjoy it.

Arty

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hypno wifes

Does anyone know of any similar story with wifes trigger words and them sleeping around hypnotized

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
controling bobbi

too short and needs allot of fucking

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