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Controlling Bobbi - AR Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Yedi07/24/13

cool

A interesting variation could be longer though

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by reopain07/25/13

Nice

This is a nice extension of Controlling Bobbi and yet takes a different direction than the original. Great job and i hope you continue the alternate reality arc.

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by zena9907/27/13

So far okay

I only gave a 4 as it is only a set up. But it is very promising.

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by Cletis07/27/13

Thanks

Hi everyone. Thanks for the feedback. I am working on part 2 right now. It is already a little longer. Sorry for those of you who want all chapters to be longer. I just let them go where they will and hope they are at least 5 pages in the word processor. Hope you all enjoy the chapters that are to follow.

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by ArtyGee08/09/13

Good Job

Cletis
Thanks again for discussing this idea with me. It's not where I was going, but it is really interesting and I'm sure readers will enjoy it.
Arty

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by Anonymous08/17/13

hypno wifes

Does anyone know of any similar story with wifes trigger words and them sleeping around hypnotized

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by Anonymous09/05/13

controling bobbi

too short and needs allot of fucking

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