All Comments on 'Dinka, the African God of the Cock'

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DesejoDesejoover 10 years ago

Cute tale..but I question the names and even the need for names in this. The Dinka live in Southern Sudan, and not in the greatest of situations either. Ali Babar brings visions to mind of Babar the elephant in the tales of the Arabian nights.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
A real Cock & Ball tale---

5-ed !

erectus123erectus123over 10 years agoAuthor
I don't know what you are smoking, check wiki as quoted below

"African mythology[edit]

Ala, Igbo goddess of fertility

Asase Ya, Ashanti earth goddess of fertility

Denka, Dinka god of the sky, rain and fertility"

Likewise Babar the Elephant is not from the Arabian nights

I'll give the quote for that next

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erectus123erectus123over 10 years agoAuthor
Maybe this is your idea of a joke? But giving misinformation is not correct behavior. Maybe you should stick to writing as your criticism seems to be rather useless and demonstrates your lack of knowledge rather than you brilliance.,

Babar the Elephant

"From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Babar the Elephant

Cover of the first Babar story, Histoire de Babar (Story of Babar), published 1931

Jean de Brunhoff

Babar the Elephant is a fictional character who first appeared in the French children's book Histoire de Babar by Jean de Brunhoff in 1931 and enjoyed immediate success.[1][2] An English-language version, The Story of Babar, introduced by A.A. Milne,[3] appeared in 1933 in Britain and the United States. "

Having many Africans as friends, Babaa and Babar are not uncommon names.

DesejoDesejoover 10 years ago

Erectus - Yes, I was in fact joking by conflating Ali Baba and Babar the elephant. As for Dinka - it is also an African tribe. I did google it and did not find the fertility reference. My mistake. I do think this would be better without the names, I'm sorry if I expressed that poorly.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years agoAuthor
A joke? We do not make fun of people's names, it is low form of humor. I pray God Dinka does not take revenge upon you!

The Mughal empire in India was founded by Zahir-ud-din Muhammad Babar, a Chaghatai Turkish ruler born on 14 February 1483. He was the son of the ruler of the petty kingdom of Farghana and inherited his father's precarious throne when he was but eleven years old. Th

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
des

just illustrated the law of unintended consequences, would have been my first thought too.

didn't vote

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
erectus

I have to admit I like your poems better when they don't rhyme, but this poem is certainly inventive and well written. Also you rhymed song and schlong which made me giggle and thus is extra points in my book. :D

I recommended this poem in the New Poems Recommendations thread on the forum.

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
What's that smell?

Dinka laughs and farts uncontrollably

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
who's kidding who?

A joke? We do not make fun of people's names, it is low form of humor. I pray God Dinka does not take revenge upon you!

seems to me I remember a rather nasty 1201 poem from you. Oh, yeh. It was your house number. Right.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years agoAuthor
when you were gone I missed you 1201, thought you were dead, even wrote a poem memorializing you

when you start sniping I remember why I didn't miss you, can you make an effort to be civil and let us enjoy the present and all be kind to each other, as in "Why can't we all be friends".....(the poor s.o.b.who said that way back just died recently) It would seem you need friends on this site!

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Erectus , 1201 , Des : Babar was not only the founder of the Mughal Empire but

His accomplice Mir Bakri destroyed a Ram Temple to build the "Babri Masjid " in Ayodhya the legendary Birthplace of Lord Ram : the demolition of the Babri Masjid by Hindu Nationalists in 1991 caused tremendous Political upheavals , rioting & communal divide in India much worse than the Racial divide over Trayvor-Zimmermann or Rodney King in USA !!! So while i really do Not know why an European White joker called an African Elephant Babar people, Babar is Big here in India as the Founder of the Legendary Mughal Empire !?!?

erectus123erectus123over 10 years agoAuthor
ignorance

is not a laughing matter, tks my dear friend!

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