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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/25/13

the stories

are terrible and getting worst total stupidity, just a waste of time. I use to defend the authors but now just garbage.

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by betrayedbylove07/25/13

Hey

What's happening with you?

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by Drbeamer333307/25/13

Enjoyed it

A fun little read. Very humorous.

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by Anonymous07/25/13

No defense of garbage like this.

Just another example of the low standards of Literotica (or is it Garbagerotica).

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by Anonymous07/25/13

loved it

Great story loved it. Funny endings

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by Anonymous07/25/13

I Love It!

The final paragraph... she is mad because her husband didn't tell her about the money!

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by Anonymous07/25/13

Nice twist!

The stories have been lame lately, but this was nicely done. Didn't see the ending coming...

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by Anonymous07/25/13

You write some of the best tales on Literotica

And yet, there always seem to be nitpickers out there. This story was a lot of fun, with a surprise ending, and the second to last sentence was priceless.

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by Anonymous07/25/13

I'll give you a 5 for not writing a cuckold story!

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by thebuffalo07/25/13

Enjoyed the hell out of it.

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by rocketeer5007/25/13

Good set up.

Nicely written and sexy. Funny twist at the end made me go back and see how I missed that possibility.

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by SparksWillFly07/25/13

Cute Twist

On the cheating bitch theme.

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by Anonymous07/25/13

Superb

Wonderful story and quite an ending. Loved it. Great.

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by chytown07/26/13

Thanks***

For the read.

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by Sexywife10407/26/13

I liked it.

Nice twist at the end. Well done.

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by gordo1207/30/13

OK that got me laughing at the end

4*

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by Anonymous03/15/15

Nice twist!

Should have been an April Fool's Day entry. Better than most I've read thus far!

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