I like the pacing although I wish the chapters were a bit longer. Still this is very compelling. I'm not normally a big fan of pet play, but I'm glad I clicked on this story. I like the approach so far. Very hot! Keep writing, I can't wait to see where this goes. :D
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Anonymous07/28/13
Very good.
I'm loving your story! I have just recently began reading pet play and I have to say this one is probably one of my favorites so far :)
Thank you for this excellent chapter, please do keep writing about these adorable characters. I will be interested to see how Beth's friends and family take to her new lifestyle.
introducing the nuances of a full Owner-pet relationship. Your writing style is easy to read, capturing the budding complexity of your characters.
I hope you are up for writing more chapters. Please keep writing.
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Anonymous02/05/14
Damn!
You are Good... Plz rite more...
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Anonymous12/16/14
Please
Please keep writing you are great
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Anonymous03/19/15
This is the cutest thing everrrrr!!!
And it kinda reminds me of me and my own friend as well =w= Thanks so much for writing this!
English
Love it so far!
I like the pacing although I wish the chapters were a bit longer. Still this is very compelling. I'm not normally a big fan of pet play, but I'm glad I clicked on this story. I like the approach so far. Very hot! Keep writing, I can't wait to see where this goes. :D
Very good.
I'm loving your story! I have just recently began reading pet play and I have to say this one is probably one of my favorites so far :)
Nice
Can't wait to read more! You gotta continue this.
At this point Beth is still fully dressed.
Delightful
Very sweet and cute, with just the right amount of kinky. You simply MUST continue!
Please write a 3rd chapter!
Please write a third one!
More!
I love your writing style and your balance of petplay and lust is on point!
More please
More
Love to see the next installment
Thank you
Thank you for this excellent chapter, please do keep writing about these adorable characters. I will be interested to see how Beth's friends and family take to her new lifestyle.
Another good chapter...
introducing the nuances of a full Owner-pet relationship. Your writing style is easy to read, capturing the budding complexity of your characters.
I hope you are up for writing more chapters. Please keep writing.
Damn!
You are Good... Plz rite more...
Please
Please keep writing you are great
This is the cutest thing everrrrr!!!
And it kinda reminds me of me and my own friend as well =w= Thanks so much for writing this!
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