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by Anonymous07/26/13

Totak fucking rubbish

Put it in the bin and don't write any more

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by Anonymous07/26/13

Pick a fucking tense

And stay with it. I got dizzy with all the flipping back and forth.

And not even that interesting on top of everything else.

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