by dannyboy111
it had an interesting premise, when it started but now it feels too stretched.
I love these stories and will be sad when they end. Keep up the good work
I know the comment above says that the story far fetched, but stories likes these aren't really? GREAT work. Keep it up. It is sexy. It is fun. Would love for you to read my stuff and let me know what you think.
Don't let any negativity get to you! I'm certain you're building a very loyal following, but for the love of god stop teasing us!
Do I need to insert the (DUH!) here or what? Its an erotic story. Far fetched is not the same as impossible though and it is a very enjoyable read. I just wish the stories were longer. Keep on writing! Don't let the haters get to you. they probably do it anonymously because they don't have the courage to leave an email or name to their comments.
Man your stories are awesome best on literotica keep this awesome series up I check everyday for updates awesome stuff
I love these stories. Read the whole series today rubbing my wet cunt. Cum three times. The little slut was literally begging to get her tits fucked and cum all over her face. Can't wait for the next chapter where, hopefully, daddy's going to fuck her hard.
Love the story. Disappointed that Daddy has yet to actually fuck Krissy's pussy. Will there be more.
I love this series. It's really hot and I always like most of the scenes and every thing is well written, but the fact Krissy, step-dad and mom have done ALL this and NOT fucked yet is kind of making me lose interest. I like to be teased, but there is a point where they should just fuck and get it over with. I would rather see more hot stories from this author then one story dragged out . Again, I really this but they need to fuck already.
Just like the dude below me they have to fuck and soon
This story is seriously one of the sexiest things I've ever written. I for one LOVE the slow build-up in this series. Can't wait to read the rest.
This scene on the couch especially is almost unbearably sexy. So casual, yet so sensual and HOT. You have a real gift and I hope you keep writing!
I meant to say, "This story is seriously one of the sexiest things I've ever READ."
I caught the mistake because I came back to re-read this story ;)
Thanks again, dannyboy111.
Are you writing anything new? Can't wait for whatever you have in store.
you have made me cum with each chapter. Love the idea of the daughter learning and being trained. And she is a virgin!! Please let the dad take her cherry