Shareholders' Conference

on the negative side

This story is written from a woman's point of view. While there is a decent build-up, the sex degenerates into a standard porn scenario written from a man's point of view. There's no reason in hell why anyone picking up an attractive woman and going to bed with her would waste his time making comparisons to an absent husband, such as "I am going to drill your little cunt and your husband's precious little darling is going to get spunked up". Really? This is all too obviously the author speaking.

Too bad. The story started out OK, but then it imploded. The author can have any fantasy he wants, but a story needs more credibility for it to interesting.

stopped reading

,,,as soon as I read that the husband had a little cock. Believe it or not, people do cheat for other reasons.

I agree, the way this is written

this woman never had any love at all for her husband. She is a mean, cruel bitch that wouldn't waste my spit on. Awkward hell, the only reason I'd be at the station would be to see the look on her face when she was presented with divorce papers and I would hunt her lover down and put him in a wheelchair for the rest of his life.
Technically this story is written okay, it's just a little unreal. I don't see how these two could have ever stayed married this long in the first place.

I see the gun in John's hand a half second before the slug hits me square in the heart. As the light slowly fades from my eyes, I see John turn and put the gun under his chin, and his brains splatter. I guess we'll be together in hell.

Now this story has an ending.

I like it

I like this story - the concept of a wife who has never cheated, but who has also never ruled it out in her own mind and has hinted to her husband that it might happen by saying if it ever did, she would be honest and tell him.

The story falters by pushing the bounds of believability. A 3 inch penis, for instance. An erect 3 inch penis is really, really rare. If the story had said a 5 inch penis, that would have been very believable yet would still have made it clear that the husband was small and the wife yearned for more.

The idea of David calling and rubbing things in also was overkill. So much better if the husband had accidently overheard the sounds of lovemaking because the wife had accidently pushed the wrong button and had not hung up.

That said, I'd love to read a part 2 and I would encourage the Part 2 to be more believable. The wife wants a baby, as does the husband but his fertility is borderline, the wife is sexually active with both men, but its David who knocks her up.

Yet you read every one of these stories Dear Anonymous

you one sick fucked up in the head person. You read and bitch read and bitch! Man you really need help. I gave it a 5!!!

NOT THIS TIME

Usually, I have great respect for the writes on this website. I have written reports for 30 years and have lost whatever creative writing skills I ever had if any. However, this writer and this story is pure bullshit. I could have written a report about a murder/rape and had a better story than this. It truly is bullshit.

As a bit of fun writing it is pretty good, but if you look at the story line in a serious vein, this is one sick woman. Now, I have no doubt that there are men and women who would be so vicious toward poor John with his small dick, but she can't seriously believe that her marriage will survive this weekend? Then again, maybe she has gotten a better offer, but it is highly unlikely that Mr. big dick would want her long term. So now it is off to hearth and home to endure the messy end of a marriage, with the strong potential as at least one other has mentioned, that her demise is the end.

Sorry

Sorry but I didn't enjoy this. Don't get me wrong I love stories where a wife gets laid by another man. I'd love to get a phone call from my wife in a hotel telling me she just got screwed by a guy with a huge cock and he's going to fuck her again. But the husband in this story obviously didn't enjoy this scenario and she was downright cruel about it. Not very appealing.

Twisted

The truth is stranger than fiction. And whose to say the writer didn't live this very scenario? He might've changed the where, but the what and how?? Like I said, stranger than fiction.

Herd there is a cure . 44 mag to the head .

Not a true story rather a pseudo story

With virtually no character development ths star of the story is first shown to be a selfish bitch then a very long (obvious) seduction tale and of course culminating in adulterous sex and suddenly this imaginary tale ends. Which of course there is no resolve for the dumbest decision the star of the pseudo tale ever made. By passing reading this flash story would be an excellent idea.

1* for more reasons than I care to bother to list.

Well done

That was a clever ending.

Another Sad cucky story

Another civilized(?) cuckold story complicated by a hanging chad. If you don't finish it, then, please, let someone else do it.

no need

Well written, if a bit brusk. I guess you wanted to move into the hurting as fast as possible.

She is no decent woman.
Goes from cool and detached to cruel and sadistic in 2 nights.....not really.

That marriage was long dead before she got on the train.
But now she has made a right mess of it and must clean up.

Stupid and unnecessarily hurtful.
What is it with you? You get off on the hurt?

1*

Damn

Just another adventure of a cheating wife who cucks her husband with a large cock. Write a ch.2 where the husband finds someone who wants him for him and not just his equipment. This will give you a chance to redeem yourself.

Stupid story without sense

Take a wimpy crying husband wanting to know everything and talking like a child, a wife that goes from cheating to verbally abusing her husband within 24h and a Stranger who completely controlls this "independent" woman. Nothing fits here, just junk.
Too bad - it had potential..

'Awkward' is somewhat of an understatement

She's consciously cheated on him, repeatedly failed to protect herself or her spouse against STDs, humiliated him over the telephone and discussed deliberately impregnating herself with another man's child. It wouldn't surprise me if he pushed this idiot under the next train.

Why do all your stories portray the women as

Life support systems for their cunts with no other redeeming qualities whatsoever? Very accurate but very curious

What on Earth was John Doing Waiting on the Platrform?

He should have been at his attorney's getting thjer divorce rolling, after closing out all his bank accounts and changing his insurance beneficiaries.

what a slut

her husband is better off without her

Ok lets clear up tings

In this kind of a story, the husband always loses 2/3 of his cock the moment he says "I Do".
England does not serve divorce papers like the US. So most likely he was there to deliver them, mail is so impersonal.
She is and always was only out for her.
You do not have two dances and jump in bed unless this is the norm for you, so she has have been cheating.

john's reaction at train station

John meets Rachel at train station. This morning the locks on doors have been changed. Credit cards /4:45 debit cards cancelled, bank account closed and John opened new account at a other bank. They meet on the landing. John takes Rachel's left band leads over to corner where 2 suitand cases rest against the wall. John takes the wedding ring and engagement rings from finger. Tells Rachel the bags have her clothes and don't come home. You are not welcome. Good bye. John turns and goes home.

How the fuck does she expect

this marriage to survive? Does she really think that John should accept this kind of betrayal? Well we don't know because you never give us enough information about their relationship, or their past leading up to this incident. OK, a flash story IS supposed to be over quick, and frivolous details left out. However, as a reader trying to decide how to react to this, a little more info would have been needed. I DO believe that a few sentences of background would have gone a long way to establish if this cheating was just stupid, evil, or looking for a way to punish her hubby for some imagined wrong. Did they already have a cuck agreement? Whatever the case, and even if the point was just to present some filthy sex, I must say the writing of the sex scenes wasn't very good or imaginative. Overall, I feel that you wanted a brief vignette, looking into this woman's adultery, but you rushed it so much, that you left out a lot of attention to detail that would have been needed to make this thing even remotely enjoyable. The (average?) reader just wants to hate the bitch, and cringe with the idea that he would tolerate this shit from his remorseless wife. Try again!

Part 2 will be very interesting.

There will be a part 2, won't there?

You need to finish this

You seem to have two options to conclude this tale, but it would be a nice surprise if you came up with a third. He either does the "burn-the-bitch" thing or he takes her back. You have not developed the characters enough to give me a feel for which option she deserves. It does seem like she is sadistic and may deserve the BTB choice, but maybe you can explain why she felt the need to rub his nose in it or constantly make him feel insecure. Do they really love each other? It isn't clear to me in what you have written so far. Anyway, finish the story. By the way, the BTB approach is the least challenging. You've created a great deal of tension, let's see you do something interesting with it.

My phone...

has a button on it that allows me to hang up and end the call. John should upgrade to such a phone so he doesn't have to listen to calls he doesn't want to take. The only possible reason to be at the station to pick up this vindictive whore is to take her home and whip her raw with a belt before unceremoniously dumping her back outside.

Best Story You Have Written

Dont listen to all of the jealous assholes that know their wives hate their tiny cocks. This story was great! Keep ones like this one coming!,

I quit reading when she teased her husband about his cock.

To purposely insult her husbands cock is one of the worst things a wife can do. It simply isn't funny anymore than saying her cunt stinks. No one is perfect and models get help with air brushing and photoshop.

Hurt could not describe it.

What she allowed to happen with her phone with the lover is the most hurtful thing she could have ever done. Anyone that would allow themselves to stay with someone that did them this way is not a MAN. She could not love him at all to allow that to happen no matter how much she liked the sex with her lover. She might at will came home and shot her husband at least it would have been a quick death.
This way He will suffer forever. The only thing worse she could do is have the baby that was not her husbands let him raise it as his only to tell him when He is to old to have more that it was NOT his.
I'm glad this is only a story!
I was well written by the way just didn't like the subject.

Decently written

I hope you have a sequel planned.

Her character is well developed, however, her relationship with her husband needs to be explored. It sounds as if he lacks some confidence. I think of him as a sort of nerd with just a modicum of confidence. This reminds me a little of the couple, Dan and June, in Metamorph.

I would love to see him be a really intelligent guy who gets revenge on David by impoverishing him.

I also guess she has a sadistic streak, since she allowed David to completely humiliate John. Maybe something where he humiliates he is warranted.

While I am not a fan of cuckold only (no retribution or reconciliation) stories, I am rating this on the writing only.

4* (would be 5 for a well developed John character)

You can always tell . . .

The pathetic men out there that know this could be them tomorrow. They suck in bed, they're lazy as hell, and have no real reason why their wives stay with them. You can hate on these stories all you want but it's not going to change anything. I wonder if the ring you gave your wife has ever been on her hand while she guides my cock into her married cunt? Possibly.

the best i can say is that

you have the capacity to form english sentences. The chick is an odd duck. Maybe one of those unfortunates having an extra chromosome - or missing one?

In any event, all three characters are one dimensional. The seducer is portrayed simply as sadistic, the wife as cognitively underdeveloped, and the husband as...who knows...insecure?

I'd read another chapter if the motives and characters were fleshed out a little better.

Can I read??

Unprotectable. Not unprotectble.

Learn how to spell then lets compare intelligence levels. Until then, I'm not wasting my time at an intellectual war with someone that has no ammunition.

Gratuitous pain!

She knew Hubby would be devastated. A promise like that is made to be broken! Since Sweetie admitted to the readers that she never intended to commit to marital exclusivity, she should have told Hubby up front what he suspected from her temporizing statement. Then, there would have been no need for the promise, or later, the admission!

The story was bleak, Sweetie's complicity in her Bull's cruelty was heinous, and she will probably be glad to be divorced...and so should Hubby. Incidentally, I believe erect 3" is toward the bottom of the 'normal' range, with 'average' at 5 1/2" - and length has NO impact on virility or likelihood of impregnation (assuming Sweetie is willing!)

Divorce and vengeance

I would get the most amount of vengeance I could get against both of them. As for picking the wife up at the train-not happening. Instead I am waiting in the house, with gun loaded and ready. The minute she comes in I would personally hand her divorce papers and kick her ass to the curb. Then I would find out who her lover was and castrate the bastard. Now that's a part 2 worthy of writing.

Do you see....?

Any set of possible circumstances that these two stay married? I don't. If they do please post in Sci Fi where it belongs.They are done.

If you want to salvege this pathetic story

Unless you want this story to end up as another pointless wimp cuckold story. Then you had better come up with something pretty damn special that allows John to administer the most painful and humiliating retribution onto Rachel and David that you can think of.

Inexcusable

That sums it up.

Please finish her off

I hope you do finish the story. Just another female with a little power in her job and she thinks that she is #1 in her world and the husband and kids are less important. After all whats wrong with a little stray cuck, even if it is in a 3 piece wool suit! No STD there.

Yes!!

Please keep writing stories like this. Delicious!

Agree with other commentors

I am with some of the other commenters on this story. If there is a part two, this selfish bitch needs to be thrown to the curb.

5stars

Hey, all you Anonymi, this was a story. A story. It was well composed and nearly flawless. If John had gone to the conference alone and hooked up with a female shareholder, all your male commenters would rate this a 5-star. Guys--get over it. This was a story.

Awkward?

Not only is she a cheating slut, but she went back for seconds and had the temerity to call her husband during sex and had the lover insult her husband? Right to the top of the insulting bitch list! A divorce is a given. But somehow, someway, John must figure out who David was and see to it that he pays a heavy price for destroying his marriage. That being said I gave this story a "1" because the author couldn't be bothered to finish the story.

This story needs a real ending otherwise it is just another lame cuckold story.

This story needs a real ending. I think the bitch should be thrown out on her ass with nothing and Dave need to have his big cock cut off and shoved up his own ass. I could only give this story a 1 because there is no 0 rating. This story must be made up by stupid woman because no normal male has these fantasies.

Where's PArt 2

You know the part where everything gets split in 2. And they move on...seems she already has anyway.

Sick Shit

Sick fuck. But perfect for reading in mommy's basement.

If...

If her husband wasn't waiting for her in the station, then a part 2 was needed!!! But he was...for what? He accepted the cheating? Is the only answer...If he didn't accepted it, the divorce server would be the one waiting for her...This end turns this story in another sad tale about people without a drop of moral...1*

Slut/Cuck - 1 Star

Another slut & cuck tale with no ending. It takes a decent writer to deal the complex interactions of a cheating wife story and provide an ending worthy of the events. It can be a BTB or reconciliation as long as it consistent with the facts as presented. When you make the husband a cuck, he gives up his self respect and standing in the marriage.