A second 5 star bit of family fantasy! You are doing just fine with this. I think your diversion of her son and two buddies from the pool party was an exceptionally well thought out bit of writing. I look forward now to haw well you might work this story line along even further. BTW your use of just enough story to make us want more is a superior writing style. Allow the imagination of a reader do some of the work and they will enjoy it even more. Unlike authors who continue to depict in your face sex scenes with every character they introduce, your writing shows some real fantasy class,
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Anonymous07/27/13
Excellent story!
Love your picture! Makes it even sexier to read your story knowing what you look like. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to more!!
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Anonymous07/29/13
Great continuation
I agree with the other reader knowing what you look like makes the stories real. I think of you as Candice and doing all those nasty things for her son. Wish I could I do so e of those things with you. You are very sexy.
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YEAH THAT WAS A VERY GOOD STORY
A second 5 star bit of family fantasy! You are doing just fine with this. I think your diversion of her son and two buddies from the pool party was an exceptionally well thought out bit of writing. I look forward now to haw well you might work this story line along even further. BTW your use of just enough story to make us want more is a superior writing style. Allow the imagination of a reader do some of the work and they will enjoy it even more. Unlike authors who continue to depict in your face sex scenes with every character they introduce, your writing shows some real fantasy class,
Excellent story!
Love your picture! Makes it even sexier to read your story knowing what you look like. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to more!!
Great continuation
I agree with the other reader knowing what you look like makes the stories real. I think of you as Candice and doing all those nasty things for her son. Wish I could I do so e of those things with you. You are very sexy.
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