All Comments on 'Mrs. Young Ch. 04'

I'm sure many think the same. It isn't very nice to start a good story and then stop with a vague promise.

Looking back at what I typed at the end I do see that was a vague promise now that I'm looking at it with a readers point of view. I am visiting the site everyday multiple times. I do plan on adding another chapter and will have it up as soon as I can. I'm quite flattered that so many people are interested in this story. I want to think everyone for this.

There is a skeleton of a woman in a rocking chair, wearing a t-shirt that says: Im waiting for the perfect man. Before this guy finishes this , i will turn into a skeleton.

I have just picked up on this story. I am so glad that I not had to wait years (Nov '12 to Jun '140 between start and 4th chapter.

Please try to progress this story. I am enjoying the story line and look forward to the next issue.

Teasing, just like in the story. Consummate it already. LOL

Kim in Kansas

It's ofcourse a bit sad that we've had to wait for such a long time for another chapter (and he still hasnt banged Mrs Young!) but it's definitely been worth the wait. You're a good writer man, I hope you keep it up, find the inspiration, such things. KUTGW!!

Story! But I agree that it takes a very long time to get the next chapter. It's hard to keep track of all the stories that we are wAiting for the next chapter of. I really don't want to miss chapter 5 however there is no way for me to keep track of when this will happen.

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This is by far my favorite erotic story. The suspense has been killing me and althought this chapter was fairly short the quality made up for the quantity as always. I understand that you are indeed a busy person with a life outside of writing but please don't have us waiting another year. Aside from agonizingly slow updates, this story has no flaws in my opinion. Keep it up :)

cant wait for chapter 5

only to be interrupted.

Kind of like this series, it starts, there is an interruption, and then nothing.

Mrs. Young and Matthew, They have their brief moments as Jenny and Matt only to be interrupted before completion. Ch. 04 and 05

Hey You, you heard all these people want to find out whats new with this story. I'm waiting too. I know that boy gunna get him sommma Momma, so I'll stick around for awhile more. But damn Dude git it out!!

The build-up is getting excruciating! (Which is good, it only goes to show how good your writing has been.)

Take your time with chapter 5. I'm sure many people are going to be rushing you -- I would rather it come out in its full, complete form than anything else.

Definitely one of the best series on this site.

This could have been a very good story. Leaving me hanging does not endear

You to me. Does Anna get pregnant? Do she and Michael continue their relationship even without Matthew? Can Matthew and Jenny continue and still maintain Michael's love and friendship? Where does Jenny's husband come into this? Regardless of what you think, for good or bad the husband will be part of the story at some point. You need to finish this story, even if you don't want to extend it's length you should wrap it up.

Please write chapter 5 you had me reading non stop as Mrs Youngis my wifes title and i could imagine you being with my wife and her relaying your story to me in private carry on writing you have a true knack Billy

Great story, great writing, great insight, need more from you...........

This whole deal (4 Chapters, so far) reminds me of the old "Little Red Riding Hood" joke from my teen years:

Little Red Riding Hood was bopping through the forest on her way to Grandma's house when the Big, Bad Wolf jumped out in front of her and said:

"Little Red Riding Hood" ! I'm going to EAT YOU UP !"

Little Red Riding Hood put her fists on her hips while tapping her right foot ... and said; " EAT ! EAT ! EAT ! DOESN'T ANYBODY FUCK ANYMORE ??? "

Meanwhile ... Jenny Mrs. Young and Matthew-Matt are eating and blowing each other silly, I'm left wondering ... "Will Chapter 5 (if it ever appears) show that Matt will *finally* "get some" !

Let them **DO IT** already !

It took you a year to come up with this fourth chapter in which there's just one interrupted sex act?

This is LitEROTICA, not LitMORALIZING, nor LitPHILOSOPHIZING.

All of this yakking back and forth between Matt and Jenny is getting tedious. It's not erotic. It's boring.

It would be better if it led to some sort of payoff, but we've gotten so very little of that in four chapters spread over two year's publishing time. It's not worth the bother to keep track of when the next chapter may, or may not be, published. If the track record holds, it won't be until sometime in summer 2015 anyway.

It's been a long way to go for very little sexual content. Too much "tease" and not enough "please". It's time for Matthew and Mrs. Young to move on with their separate lives.

You stop when Mrs Young is just starting to warm up. This is insane! What happens next?

I'm going back to writers that believe in complete love making. Wasted way too much time on you.

Isn't it about time you added more and maybe finished this - it's one of my favourites! Please, please, please, can we have more...?!!

I for one think you're leading up to something brilliant. Don't sweat it, but please tie the bow at the end of this. All of your work is building up to a sexy sexy raunchy and guilty fuck-fest between Matthew and Mrs. Young. Until that happens, I'll patiently await your finishing this series.

Thanks for everything.

This story is one of my strongest fantasies . I cannot control it ... I was in the lingerie section of a department store just a few days ago and a stunningly beautiful Sales Lady come up and asked if she could help me.I looked at her blushing as I was holding a pair of Jockeys new silky panties my fingers sliding over the soft crotch .

" Ohh Those are my favorite panties" she said. They feel wonderful ... I feel so feminine when I wear them . I'm sure you would like them too , she said, her beautiful face glowing with enthusiasm . Are they for someone special ? she asked . No...I stammered.. Blushing . " I understand..don't worry.. I will help you .. Would you like to try these on ? " Here I'll show you wear to change" ... I followed her .. Somehow knowing she was wearing the panties like I had it my hand. I stared at her short dress..she was swaying her hips and all I could think of was being under her dress sucking on her pussy through those lovely panties, her dress hiding me . I went into the small changing room while she waited just outside. " I will wait here ... ask me any questions ." I went in and pulled the panties up ... Pre cum leaking .. I was engulfed by the smell of the little room.. Nothing but a curtain separating us. I couldn't help myself and began to slide my finger up and down my cock pretending I was stroking my clit ... I couldn't hold back and convulsed in orgasm , biting my lip as I spurted cum into those silky panties .. Thrusting . Soaking them. I moan escaped as I came. " . Are you ok ? Do you like them ?she said. Yess I hoarsely said. " Come out when you are ready.I have to check for other customers " Embassased I tried to wipe as much cum from the panties and folded them to hide it as I approached her at the register . She was smiling , a knowing sparkle in her voice . "Did you like them and would you like additional pairs ? ..I'll get them for you.." Yes... Please I stammered. She came back with four more pairs...pink,white , black , and one with little flowers . My hands were shaking as I saw her bring the pair soaked with my cum to her face as inhale... Her eyes closed .. Smiling . I knew you would like them she said as she rang them up and put them in a bag , wrapping the pair soaked with cum in blue paper with a little gold seal. " I know this is Special pair " she said." My name is Megan and I am here every Wednesday .

I really enjoyed your storie, It was well written and seemed so real, I can

believe something like that happening in real life!

Because as teases go, this definitely is turning into one...

Of course, the thing to keep in mind about teasing is you have to be careful about carrying it too far... I'm really hoping YOU don't...

And, admittedly, I'm curious to see what the end game is going to be...

Loving it though you're driving me nuts...

I keep stroking my cock, till the last page..good job

story was pretty good , but not finished !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It have been a complete ending by having Matt finally have the opportunity to fuck Mrs. Young to many orgasms as she lacked being fucked by her hubby by being left alone for so long!!!!Mrs Young probably had cobweb on her pussy....!!!!

Dang it all to heck. Boy, you got my team of horses all riled up and it's going to take you finishing this sumbitch up before I get a second of rest. Jenny OBVIOUSLY now is grinding on him, soaked. He's harder than a box of rocks. You, had better finish this story or I'll make you celibate. Forever.

Awesome story, thank you. Hopefully Ch.05 will continue the way that the other chapters have been written.

Good story

But der should be one more part

When is the next part

Write more so good

i find it an enjoyable read

You need to finish this story. Please!

How can you just leave this hanging!?

Love this!

Enjoyed the series mainly due to the realistic internal conflict being endured by the main protagonists. It helps makes the story believable and endures readers care about what happens to the characters. It's a shame there wasn't a more natural conclusion to each chapter and you really need an editor to clean up the typos and errors, but I hope you find the motivation and time to continue the story and provide the ending that the comments show many are craving.

Good story line & developing characters. Need to pay attention to grammar & word choice it is a significant distraction & is really off putting for the reader. Looking forward to your next instalment.

Thank goodness that I just found this story series and I don't have to wait for the next chapter. This story is damned exciting. It feeds into my fantasies as a kid. Thanks for sharing

If you will write more, we men will like to see what you like to fantasize about regarding younger lovers and how you enjoy them.

We agree with 'Amsterdam'. It's probably just echoing real life with all its conflicts and uncertainties, but the story does seem to be dragging on a bit now.

Still going strong, you have kept this at a high level of writing,