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good writing but
I'm sure many think the same. It isn't very nice to start a good story and then stop with a vague promise.
Let me rephrase
Looking back at what I typed at the end I do see that was a vague promise now that I'm looking at it with a readers point of view. I am visiting the site everyday multiple times. I do plan on adding another chapter and will have it up as soon as I can. I'm quite flattered that so many people are interested in this story. I want to think everyone for this.
hello
There is a skeleton of a woman in a rocking chair, wearing a t-shirt that says: Im waiting for the perfect man. Before this guy finishes this , i will turn into a skeleton.
Hi
I have just picked up on this story. I am so glad that I not had to wait years (Nov '12 to Jun '140 between start and 4th chapter.
Please try to progress this story. I am enjoying the story line and look forward to the next issue.
WHAT A TEASE
Teasing, just like in the story. Consummate it already. LOL
Kim in Kansas
Great!
It's ofcourse a bit sad that we've had to wait for such a long time for another chapter (and he still hasnt banged Mrs Young!) but it's definitely been worth the wait. You're a good writer man, I hope you keep it up, find the inspiration, such things. KUTGW!!
Love Mrs Young
Story! But I agree that it takes a very long time to get the next chapter. It's hard to keep track of all the stories that we are wAiting for the next chapter of. I really don't want to miss chapter 5 however there is no way for me to keep track of when this will happen.
JUNE 2014 and still we wait for another chapter.
??
Less than a year please
This is by far my favorite erotic story. The suspense has been killing me and althought this chapter was fairly short the quality made up for the quantity as always. I understand that you are indeed a busy person with a life outside of writing but please don't have us waiting another year. Aside from agonizingly slow updates, this story has no flaws in my opinion. Keep it up :)
nice
cant wait for chapter 5
the story line is all about one experience after another that starts
only to be interrupted.
Kind of like this series, it starts, there is an interruption, and then nothing.
Mrs. Young and Matthew, They have their brief moments as Jenny and Matt only to be interrupted before completion. Ch. 04 and 05
Hey You!!!!!
Hey You, you heard all these people want to find out whats new with this story. I'm waiting too. I know that boy gunna get him sommma Momma, so I'll stick around for awhile more. But damn Dude git it out!!
Excellent Build-up!
The build-up is getting excruciating! (Which is good, it only goes to show how good your writing has been.)
Take your time with chapter 5. I'm sure many people are going to be rushing you -- I would rather it come out in its full, complete form than anything else.
Definitely one of the best series on this site.
coulda been
This could have been a very good story. Leaving me hanging does not endear
You to me. Does Anna get pregnant? Do she and Michael continue their relationship even without Matthew? Can Matthew and Jenny continue and still maintain Michael's love and friendship? Where does Jenny's husband come into this? Regardless of what you think, for good or bad the husband will be part of the story at some point. You need to finish this story, even if you don't want to extend it's length you should wrap it up.
wow!!!!!!!
Please write chapter 5 you had me reading non stop as Mrs Youngis my wifes title and i could imagine you being with my wife and her relaying your story to me in private carry on writing you have a true knack Billy
Here's another plea for more chapters
Great story, great writing, great insight, need more from you...........
Where is this all going ?
This whole deal (4 Chapters, so far) reminds me of the old "Little Red Riding Hood" joke from my teen years:
Little Red Riding Hood was bopping through the forest on her way to Grandma's house when the Big, Bad Wolf jumped out in front of her and said:
"Little Red Riding Hood" ! I'm going to EAT YOU UP !"
Little Red Riding Hood put her fists on her hips while tapping her right foot ... and said; " EAT ! EAT ! EAT ! DOESN'T ANYBODY FUCK ANYMORE ??? "
Meanwhile ... Jenny Mrs. Young and Matthew-Matt are eating and blowing each other silly, I'm left wondering ... "Will Chapter 5 (if it ever appears) show that Matt will *finally* "get some" !
Let them **DO IT** already !
You've gotta be kidding us
It took you a year to come up with this fourth chapter in which there's just one interrupted sex act?
This is LitEROTICA, not LitMORALIZING, nor LitPHILOSOPHIZING.
All of this yakking back and forth between Matt and Jenny is getting tedious. It's not erotic. It's boring.
It would be better if it led to some sort of payoff, but we've gotten so very little of that in four chapters spread over two year's publishing time. It's not worth the bother to keep track of when the next chapter may, or may not be, published. If the track record holds, it won't be until sometime in summer 2015 anyway.
It's been a long way to go for very little sexual content. Too much "tease" and not enough "please". It's time for Matthew and Mrs. Young to move on with their separate lives.
What!
You stop when Mrs Young is just starting to warm up. This is insane! What happens next?
Done with you
I'm going back to writers that believe in complete love making. Wasted way too much time on you.
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