A Gift From The Stars Ch. 01

Good start

It was a short first chapter but I'm a sucker for an under dog story.

Good Start

Curious where this will go.

Ok, starting off good.

Please continue, I want to read more ...

Good First Chapter

Now it will be interesting to see how things develop for Thomas.

Any longer than a week for the next chapter,

and the publishing of this story should have been pushed back. This chapter sets up a nice story world to work from but it is easily forgotten if you don't follow through quickly.

Tom Tom? At least he'll never get lost.

A bit short but interesting

I agree with the others that this is a great intro. It set up the situation well and gave us a start on understanding the main character. I do want to read more.

I fact that is the biggest complaint I have. I thought this should have been longer. It stops just as we are being drawn in. But as a first post, I can imagine wanting feedback might be worth pushing this out early.

A great start!

A great start!
The possibilities are endless. I look forward to learning about his gift and how it will impact TNT's life. Your writing style paints clear images and develops interesting characters. Keep it coming:)

Yep, a great start. On to Ch. 2.

Loved it!

It is a good introduction. I am moving on to chapter 2. Look forward to seeing how this one evolves.

Interesting

Interesting indeed, lets see where it goes
JC