I am completely speechless, this chapter blew my mind. Please update very soon.
Can't wait for more, have fun and enjoy your family time and vacation.
have to say i am disappointed in char. she knew he was fragile mentally, but she didnt let that stop her from doing the same things his family did. now he goes from being an abused young man to a submissive young man. what makes her different?
While I agree with redlion75 in part. I hope Terry isn't going to be submission. I hope this is just the start of a healthy relationship, and would like to see Terry secure enough in himself and his manhood to spank Char just like she spanked him.
It's obvious that Char was just teasing Terry, not being abusive. I think he's submissiveness is really sexy
'Love it! I totally think Terry is going to be just fine, and the fact he's not no itty bitty down there is a plus. Go Terry show Mama Char what yer working with.
Please continue Great Update...New Fan Here.
You write this awesome chapter and then you leave us? Well, I will say it worth it. Enjoy your vacay.
Creepy you're a scuzball for leaving like this!!!! Hurry back hun and finish this story!!!!!
Enjoy your vacay hun and come back soon!!!!!! =P
Char ain't no joke, all she need is a superhero costume.
Now all Terry need is some time to build himself up.
Enjoy your vacation!
Char s no different to his so called family and you lost me as a reader at the start of page 2 1*
Char is the bomb, lol! I understand everyone has their opinions and everything, but what I don't understand is how someone can say that Char is the same as Terry's family. Really? Terry was being abused by his family. Char is NOT abusing Terry. Terry has a crush on Char and Char did take advantage of that, but NOT in a bad way. Terry very much liked what Char did to him; there is a difference. So, I do not see where all this Char hate is coming from. But it is what it is. I loved it and cannot wait for the next installment.
Another great chapter, i was taken back at how char came on so strong considering, but it made the story unpredictable which i think is great. Best story ive read on this site. Happily and patiently awaiting the next chapter.
Darn, I dont like submissive males but this story is so cute. Keep up the good work.
Fab chapter! My first time really enjoying a male submissive scene. Please continue as you built things up perfectly for Char to take up the role of Dominatrix if that's your aim.
Char is a bad bitch!!! Terry is so cute I just wanna pinch his cheeks Lol. But enjoy your vacation. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
This chapter was OMG good!! Char beat that ass good and Terry... He said he liked it! Oh damn, please post soon :-)
They're in love with each other, but don't recognize it because of the
dynamic that brought them together. Everyone else can see it.
Now please bag and tag that asshole Henry....please. Looking forward
to the next installment.
I love this story. It's so original and the characters are well written. My only complaint, and it's not even that, is Terry's submissiveness in the bedroom. I love submissive males but, I don't know if I want him to become Char's sex bitch. I'd like to see this couple do something different than the usual 'Femdom' roles. Maybe a teasing, but loving, Char that enjoys getting Terry fired up. I'd also enjoy seeing Terry become stronger, mentally. Give him the courage to go up to Char and say "Let's fuck." Ok, maybe not exactly like that but, it'd be very interesting, and hot, to see Terry with more confidence. But whatever you decide, I'm looking forward to it. Enjoy your vacation! 5/5
You leave me on a cliff, really? I want to read mooooore, now I gotta throw a tantrum until the next chapter comes out lol.
I'm not sure how I feel about this chapter. He is so meek, and young acting that I ALMOST feel like Char is molesting him. I would feel the same if the roles were reversed. I don't like the women to behave in such a manner either.
How fair is it that Char gets to abuse Terry's family, he has honestly been through to much violence in his young life. Char needs some one her age, she has already raised her siblings she can't be raising her man 2. Just saying
More, please. I know you are probably busy and everything, BUT, this story is too good. Terry has a crush the size of earth on Char. I feel that these feelings are new to Char and definitely new to Terry. It's rare where the woman is the strong lead and is a protector of the man. You're doing it with this story. I love it! But, I know that Terry is still a man, however inexperienced he is. He just has to grow into himself, it will take time, but I believe he will. Char will help him, lol and I know Terry won't mind. Love may not be there yet, then again maybe it is. Char did not take advantage of Terry in my opinion and as for the age, he's a grownup. Char is not that much older. But, I know everyone has their own views of right, wrong, moral, and immoral; just please keep updating.
Not only is he a peek a boo freak he likes to be spanked lol naughty boy, quite the little sub
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