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Ugly Betty Grows Up Ch. 01

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by Anonymous08/11/13

great start!

I like how you made them seem like real people. The dialogue and chemistry was good and I can't wait for part two.

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by Anonymous09/19/13

amazing beginning

It reads just like the show would have. I can hear daniel and bettys voice in my head. Cant wait to read the rest.

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