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The Old Clay Pot Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/29/13

Well so far I am right about how this would develop

She is fucking any cock waved at her and he is a full cuckold now.
She will go home with a lot of reminders that he is a true WACC worthy of no respect or love, and she is a stinking gutter slut to be used, abused and discarded.

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by Anonymous07/29/13

Hard to understand why this author keeps posting!

Even worse than the usual trash cheating wife stories posted in Literotica.

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by Anonymous07/29/13

Da'fuq is wrong with the author?

Puerile excrement. Couldn't wade through the crap without some hipwaders and I left them in the boat.

Here's an idea. Take your hatred for women and keep it to yourself. You suck.

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by Jounar07/29/13

just shit

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by Kenisshy07/29/13

Sad

That this writer hasn't figured out that putting the details of his life up to this point would make someone care about excrement piled nose deep in his postings. Read the last chapter and thought he would be smart enough to let it go at that. But this writer has his head jammed to far up his own ass to see that he's just repeating the same drivel from different angles.

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by Anonymous07/29/13

pathetic shit

ban this author from Lit.... Please!

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by Anonymous07/29/13

i'm sure

you write for your pleasure because i'm sure no one else likes this crap so when you get an idea like this from now on keep it to yourself.

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by Anonymous07/29/13

You are a disgusting person whoever the fuck wrote this! I mean are you trying to make all your readers puke? Just because this an erotic site doesn't mean you should try to write the dirtiest thing you can imagine. I guess next you'll have her eating shit from a dogs ass!?!? Sicko!!!

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by Anonymous07/29/13

"powerless to stop it"
So not only is this guy fucking disgusting he is also a fucking pussy. How many of you guys are sick to death reading about weak husbands. How could you even be around her without puking your guts up? I mean everybody wants to smell piss and shit. Who needs jasmine or lavender when you can smell stale urine while kissing your wife!? Someone in this authors family may want to see about having this guy committed. Seriously disgusting to the extreme! The only thing you left out was having her eat piss and scat!

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by looking4it07/29/13

Cheap

This reads like a bad porn comic or graphic novel. It has the same degree of immaturity and sophomoric situations that they do with difference being the reader has to add their own pictures. If it were a tale of cheating or vacations gone out of control I'd probably be furious with the story so far, but this is (I really really hope anyway) a fantasy of sorts that is better lived out in the imagination than in real life. It is bound to get uglier and hubby dearest is going to lose total control (my guess is that he will eventually even lose track of her) before its all over. It might be best to think about divorcing her but turn around and become her pimp because that is where this story is headed.

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by Anonymous07/29/13

Stick with watching bad porn.

I like stories where the people actually have a brain, and sometimes use them, -5!

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by Lickideesplit07/29/13

No chancres or scabs?

If you have trouble offending people to a predetermined degree, then stick in some 'piss-sour' shorts or a yellow smelly tongue or mouth! Vermin were, for the most part, omitted! Maybe in the next chapter? Better? Maybe NO next chapter!!!

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by Anonymous07/30/13

It was disgusting the way he was treated my wife

I give up. This is shite. I'm ashamed to think this author lives less than 50 miles from me.

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by Anonymous07/31/13

Comments

Don't like cuck wife stories? Here's some novel advice- don't read them! I liked the theme - hope the author writes more.

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by Anonymous08/01/13

Love it

Take no notice of the negative comments I love this story especially ch 1 with the old lady using your wife keep the chapters coming love it

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by Anonymous09/23/13

Keep going great theme

Enjoyable, keep up with - let the critics do like all of our politicians - do as well as what you criticize! Most have never even tried.
Cant wait to see the next part

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by Anonymous01/07/15

Love it

More. More!!!!

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