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this is good, but poetry escapes us
now, if your anything like me, you get inside
this is not where you want to be, even for 18 lines, trust me
caught the billie holliday ref.
Harry , melancholia so heart-rending !!
Great but despondent , dark imagery ---- days like this happens to the best of men .......
The last para on a re-reading is so hopeful----
It's spiritual !
Any billie Holliday is, oh, the strange fruit
yeah, that sequence in the movie, the song,
Agree with Ashesh9
Very touching, expressive, reminded me of many friends that didn't go look for the physician. The images are amazing, so evocative -
and I ADORE Billie Holliday.
Great job!
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