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Fantasy Secrets and Secret Fantasie

byMarySymes©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/29/13

Its getting better

.Like the way, the story is progressing. Keep those dreams of hers on the rise as Shawn fulfills them. Get Billy to do his mom also.

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by mexbearlll07/29/13

great story

get shawn to take her out in public more often.........

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by digdaddyrich07/29/13

A great storyline

I think they should stop using condoms, and I really glad she didn't have to fuck Billy.

Now that his mom is completely submissive towards him, he needs to make sure he shows her just how much he loves her, by doing things for her and praising her for being so beautiful.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous07/29/13

NO!!!!

No BDSM, Please! having the mom be submissive is ok, but no BDSM.

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by Anonymous07/29/13

Not at all bad...

... but I agree, no BDSM please.

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by kennyboy8207/29/13

This story is coming on in leaps and bounds. It's already got to the point where I don't want it to stop. I like the element of 'ownership' that's been brought into it. As a Master myself with some subs, I appreciate the story's progression.
The next chapter will be something special, I just know it! You've got to post it Mary.

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by Anonymous07/29/13

and the winner is.....

YOU ! Congratulations. You got rid of Billy nicely. I think his mom is going to make mistakes, and spankings may be called upon. I like the idea of more public showings, she may become a wanton vixen.

A rigid schedule of pleasure may be his best bet to keep her hopping.

Does her best friend become involved?

Thanks Don

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by Anonymous07/30/13

Breeding!

It's too late to start using condoms! Shawn and Vicky have experienced raw sex and won't want to stop it. Shawn should tell his mom that he intends to breed her and make her pregnant. He should make her keep track of her cycle and alert him when she's most fertile so he can fuck her repeatedly at that time until he succeeds.
Maybe Shawn and Vicky can seduce Billy's mom and then have her seduce Billy to take his mind off what Shawn and Vicky are doing. Of course, once Billy's mom has experienced Shawn's cock she may not be satisfied with Billy's, but that'll be their problem.

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by Anonymous08/13/13

Maybe Continued?

This ia an extraordinary story with so many new approaches and discoveries. You are a fine writer with a rare and exciting imagination.

We cannot ask you enough not to stop now!

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by Anonymous08/14/13

Let the son breed her!

Get the son to breed his mom.

The story can then go on to the next generation if she produces daughters!

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by Anonymous01/31/16

"the best pussy you'll ever have is the one you came out of"

That's an old saying, and Shawn knows how very true it is. He's been fucking his mother and he's grown and learned in the process. As his mom tells him, "The way you have taken charge of some things, taken charge of me, is very stimulating." Now Shawn understands who's boss in their relationship. He is of course--he's the one with the cock. And he's discovered one of the main things a mother's cunt is for. It's where her boy becomes a man. Naturally Shawn should breed his mommy. He's already a proud, grinning young motherfucker, blowing his balls up inside his mom any old time he feels like it. Now he should let his semen do its job and make a baby up where he was once a baby. Then his mother too will be bursting with pride. Pride in her virile manly son. Pride in her kid's fat thrusting cock. And pride in her baby boy's potent baby-making balls.

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