The Freshman

Well, it is what it is ... A superficial wanker about a normal guy with the mythical, magical cock. You go dude.

Cursed kids...

...'Then he bent her over and he spanked her. He spanked her harder than she had ever been spanked before. Twice she cried out but he didn't care. He spanked the big white ass over and over, watching it bounce and jiggle and move and sway and get redder and redder as he smacked it with his large, powerful hands.'..
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What a sick, disgusting and smelly kid .. - Damn 'lover' of beatings ...

I favorited this...

Because I want to see where it goes. Work on making it more erotic and fun. To the detractors I say, it is a work of fiction and supposed to be outlandish. If you criticize, be prepared to put your name on your critique and not hide behind anonymous. That is a chickenshit move. I agree, I grow weary of all of these stories with massive Vicks, but it is fantasy and it is the author's right to do as they please. Don't like it, don't read it.

So sick of these nonconsent stories featuring nothing but pretty little innocent white girls, why can't someone do a decent nonconsent story featuring a beautiful black girl ? !

Since when do girls WANT to suck a cock that badly? Very unrealstic!

Yeah, it is very unrealistic man.

Its super unrealistic. First she wimpers that he tried to rape her. Then, all of a sudden, she turns into a nympho slut. In 5 seconds flat. You realy should expand on characters personalities, maybe a back story, maybe a kink or fetish for the girl. Right now its like reading some 15 yo fantasies. For real. Ugh.