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by JaineEire

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MaynessMaynessover 10 years ago

Ahhh this is interesting, I see where you may be going with his and its not in the direction I originally thought! Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Clever plot twist

chapter too short, otherwise a nice effort, looking forward to ch4

FindmywayFindmywayover 10 years ago
Wonderful Twist

Wow! What an unexpected twist. I like the direction you are taking the story. Will you share if this is only a fantasy or is this a new dimension he wants to bring into there daily life?

JaineEireJaineEireover 10 years agoAuthor
Answer to Findmyway

You ask the right questions. I will explore that in the next chapters. Jaine

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 10 years ago
Fabulous!

Wonderful wonderful wonderful! Love the twist. Excellent writing! Can't wait for more!

49greg49gregalmost 10 years ago
Nice twist

It isn't what I was looking for, but it's a really nice twist.

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