A New Kind of Love Ch. 01

So you took this down? Decided to post it again and couldn't possibly take the time to edit?

I remember this. It is one of my favs. Thanks for posting it again. :)

I remember this one

I see you haven't really done anything with it. I really don't understand how it was a 'fan favorite'. Since there was no real change, I see no reason to re read it.

Steve is amusing. Stoph is an enigma, but interesting. Thought they had a chemistry starting. Didn't see it coming when Stoph shut down on Steve or understand. On the other side of the comment section are the story tags. I fail to look at them prior to starting a story. Oh, demon-angel-hell. The sub-genre which I am most unfamiliar and get lost. Perhaps your first story is less complicated and I'll manage to read the entire story. I enjoyed the first chapter.

It has an interesting start. A bit fast paced but sweet. I will look forward to reading it all to see how it develops. I either missed it before or you had taken it down before I started reading your stories but don't see any big issues so far

Snippy crits

I am perplexed when I read snotty potshots from readers. If they don't care for an entry, let them just pass on to some other lucky author's work. These authors produce an amazing range of stories, and their efforts should be applauded.

Some stories are inept, I grant you, but this is hardly the forum for teaching writing, were we to suppose these critics were qualified. How invaluable is anyone's time that they cannot kindly leave well enough alone?

Cruelty, disguised as dispassionate criticism, is like crap spray-painted gold; it still stinks.

That Doctor Faustus reference though...