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A New Kind of Love Ch. 04

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by chesthairslave08/11/13

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Profoundly better written chapter. You added layers of thoughts, wants and questions to the characters. Stoph was even feisty. Steve and Stoph had emotion and desire in this chapter. The deal never made sense before based on the briefest of connection. Their satisfying sex demonstrating that there is something to fight for keeping the couple together.

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