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by erectus12307/27/13

don't desert us my good man! welcome!

not bad for 40 years (re:your comment), a little edit here and there and; well, "meat" is applied better to males then females but never my favorite term until we get to the barbeque,
passion is stronger then life, so keep at it, if you can still get a poem or anything else up after 40 years you go to the head of the class!

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by leBonhomme07/27/13

Not bad for thirty years. Funny thing is, I could have sworn it was a sonnet, until I found it again today. Maybe I will try again.

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