All Comments on 'In Big Trouble'

now thats my kind of story hehe but could use lil kless spankin n lil more hard fuking but i loved the name xallling mmmm finnaaly a story makes me cream instantly

I'm glad it works for you!

miss conduct

Not well written or well plotted; but raunchy as hell;

made me hard

spanking, dirty talk, and fucking... what's not to love? i disagree, i think it was well written. nice job!

That just made me so wet...

Oh I hated and loved this story! It's captivating how you aroused me and made me recoil at the same time. As a father, I felt so repulsed by this man that would abuse his daughter this way, and wanted to beat him to a pulp or have him arrested. On the other hand, it's embarrassing to admit that I couldn't stop reading getting turned on as it progressed.

-Carl

Thanx, gave me a great o!

Please excuse ignorant comments from those who must have their say. The story was very well written and the plot was straight forward and to the point. The story in my opinion was fantastic.

Please write a sequel. I would love to cum again and again to your erotic writings.....

I loved the story! Very well written, too! I have sent this to "my little girl". I know She will love it! I have talked to several women and "daddy's girls" that love this type of fantasy...I am passing this story onto them too.

Thanks for sharing!

iteachu559@gmail.com

My pussy is dripping wet after reading this ;)

I wish my daddy had treated me like this...

darkangel455@mail.com

God, I wish I had a daddy who would punish me~

Dude he should have fucked ur asshholr too and tied u up

I have been punished, like this a few times. It still hurts, when it happens. Daddy is a big man. Not sure I will ever get used to the pain, but I learn my lesson. Grounding just didn't work for me.

lucky girl to have a daddy who understand discipline is necessary.

if I were her i'd be naughty all the time.

a fine story and now if you'll excuse me since I don't have a father, I need to find my vibrator.

You need to do another part to this!! Always makes me wet

i loved this, it made me so horny i peed in my pants. I am going to grt the belt but it was worth it.

I would like to cum while getting spanked. reminds me of when i had my first orgasm to touching like that. oh baby