by SubmissiveRomantic
Very nice story, I enjoyed it. I'm sure there will be critics (creeps) but what do they know? Keep writing.
Pilots call it a HERE (human element range extender). Description of 'The Hills' is spot on. Wonderful place. Both parts are great, thanks for sharing.....
This story just cruised along and was actually believable. The author has a tendency to create female characters who are stong and are fighters and chooses more deminutive men, but that's his (her) perogative. I like both and find myself sympathetic with both sets of desires and emotions. It is amazing that in 16 or 17 years of being together there appears to have been no hitch either in their personal or busilness lives (except for Bill's altercation with his boss at the lab), but maybe there are people who make their lives a smooth success. Being a science person myself I am amazed that Bill could find himself intellecltually satisfied as a truck driver and not yearn for the challange that is scientific research. But Literotica is, if nothing else, a trip through fantasyland, so why not. 5*