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by GuiltyPleasure07/28/13

I'm sorry.....

.....but arranging prose this way doesn't make a poem. It must have been an exciting encounter but none of that comes through. Next time try tapping into that feeling and help the reader to feel it too. Experiment, you have an interesting voice.

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by HarryHill07/28/13

Tess

what a positive comment. no vote from me either. I liked the other one.

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by ch3mical_r3nt_boy01/17/16

Hurrah for Big Kel!!

Not sure what the others meant when they said this wasn't a poem, this is more honest and feels more biographical than 90% of the poems I read here. Please don't stop writing, I love your style and the stories you have to tell.

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