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Ashley and Her Brother

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by Anonymous

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by dutch51307/31/13

Not Bad

Not bad but it needed to be longer .Not much of a fan of the one page stories . It's a really good story and I hope you plan to add to it . Keep writing and I'll keep reading . Thanks dutch513 .

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by Anonymous07/31/13

Excellent!

A well-packed episode....and I especially appreciate its brevity.

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by skip295107/31/13

hot

hot and well written...could feel the emotions you were feeling and the lust.....part 2 soon please......

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by worshipper62207/31/13

Keep writing

Your writing has depth. The complaints are from "strokers."

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by beguiled99907/31/13

Liked it

I like it and I would definitely read more. I like the addition of the BDSM. I actually think that works well in some incest stories.

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by cassiec08/01/13

Really good!

I hope you continue on with this story! I agree that it would be better if it was longer. But I still loved it. 5 stars!

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by Anonymous08/01/13

So very well written. You can just so feel the lust and emotion. It was a hell of a tease them not going further this time but it's a good reason for part 2. I'll be reading it!

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by prop6908/01/13

Need Chapter 2

Instant hard on....can't wait for Chapter 2 and beyond

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by Anonymous08/01/13

Wow

Very well written and I love the story. I hope there are some true aspects of it. I had a similar experience with my sister. Email me if you want to discuss it. Hou Tx m30 at g mail dott com.

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by gialuv2408/01/13

Great story!

Great job....I'm looking forward to reading the next continuation of this story.
It left me very wet...Thank you!

Kisses, Gia

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by Anonymous08/01/13

LOVE IT!

I will admit that I wish it was longer. ONLY because it is so very well written and enticing! It left me hungry for more! SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH CHAPTER 2 QUICK!!!1

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by woody123008/05/13

can't wait for the upcoming chapters

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by prop6901/12/17

Great start...made me hard

love to taste her finger

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