All Comments on 'Shelter Ch. 00-01'

Looking forward to a lovely story.

You give us one page? You tease! Let's get this story going. It looks like it could be a good one.

It seems to be off to a good start. The paragraphs are easy to read with enough detail to get me hooked.

Jen

Great start - can't wait for more!

You start with a quote from Kinky, then only submit one page.

That is a terrible way to get votes and retain readers.

But the story is wonderful, please write more.

I enjoyed your story... what there was of it so I'm looking forward to reading more.

Thank you.

I posted the next three chapters last night. Seems that the conversion factor between MS Word pages and Lit pages wasn't *quite* what I anticipated... So heaven only knows how many pages the next installment will be, but ... it's on its way.

And, more importantly, thank you all for your kind words. Your comments are sustaining, in a surprising way to me.

As I've told you before many times, this is an excellent this story! The description you use and the words you choose are always spot on, you have quite a knack for that. Look forward to the rest... and as for "This Years Model", my vote is to post!

I love the beginning of the story. I am so tired of the "wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am" type of stories. Thank you for taking the time to introduce us to your friends. And, yes, that is deliberate: "Friends," not characters. I try to do the same thing with my stories. And don't pay any attention to anyone complaining about the length of the story. I had the exact same thing happen to me when I posted my first story.

Great start. Thanks

interesting