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The Girl Next Door

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/04/13

my pet hate

Started off well but you lost me when her name changed from delilah to tamara

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by Anonymous08/04/13

Interesting premise...

has definite add=on possibilities. Definitely has the makings of a continuing story. Thank you.

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by rg2761208/04/13

who did what to whom?..

Good storyline, but better outlining/proofreading sill keep character names straight. Look forward to more.

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