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by HarryHill07/30/13

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by Anonymous07/30/13

I always enjoy your work, oneiria. This one's good, but I have to confess (no pun intended) the 3rd stanza felt too distant in time for me, however much the reasons for war overlap, and I think the poem would have been even better without it.

greenmountaineer here. For some reason, Lit still won't let me log on for comments.

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