by lawn
Quite a good opening. I will enjoy seeing where you take the couple from this point.
Thank you for your comments and thoughts. I'm encouraged and hope you all continue to try and enjoy my writing.
Readers,
I'm too much a newbie to know how to do everything required of a lit writer. I have received feedback that was not posted her about 'Pammy Submits' nor does there seem to be a way to respond. So I will do it here.
Your feedback was appreciated and I am flattered by your words:
'We thought your story was lovely. We often think of fantasies where we are so grateful we become an older man's pet.
They are only fantasies of course but they are scrumptious.
Can you let me know when you write your next story.'
I do not know how to let you know when my next story is out. Chapter 2 is out and Chapter 3 is pending. Keep a check on new story releases.
Thanks again for your kind thoughts
lawn
More practice in writing would make you a bettter writer
Thanks for your feedback, anonymous. I will do that. Any specific things you'd like to point out to help me do better.