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Between Flights

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by Anonymous

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by todski2808/01/13

Love this piece

A nice little snippet of a casual fling

I especially liked the images present in

pieces of her uniform and his piled
side-by-side, never mingling, very
much the way their bodies would
soon be piled together but still mostly
just doing their own thing

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by GuiltyPleasure08/01/13

Some nice images....

....but I found it too like prose broken into lines. Not one of your best imo. Voted anyway.

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