A Fine Line Between Hate And Lust

Strange

Hard to figure out. All of the psycho-babble sounds like pure bullshit to me. Now does the hateful cousin get part of the trust fund? Needs a ch.2.
Carry on.

I liked it. *****

Thanks for writing. tom anon

Fantastic. A well-written (including grammar and syntax), totally new take on the incest genre with an innovative premise. Very well done!

Original idea.

Hap, I have to give you full credit for originality. This one was WAY out of left field! LOL

Don't get me wrong, that's not a bad thing. It's one of those tales that makes people laugh. At least it made me laugh. It was so far out there, that there's no way it could be anything but pure gold.

Oh, and with the whole "cousin" thing, adopted or not, it could have probably gone into Incest/Taboo as well.

5 ROFLing Stars! :D

Original idea but once again it is extremely hard to enjoy a story where you hate almost every single character.

did not

like any of the characters in this story he became as big an asshole as she was.

you've had a few stories...

that have made me cringe, but gotta say, I actually liked this one. I worry that you will do a follow-up from her point of view, but the retelling of the events won't add to the intrigue as much as make us hate her more. That said, I wonder two things about her: 1)what does she think about participating in the study? and 2)why would she waste her time fucking him if he can't help her career? Wasn't she fucking the upper level management? And then all ready almost caused a lawsuit for her employer, wouldn't she be a lot more careful (or diligent?) about only fucking the right people at work from here on out (or at least be tempted to quit the fucking around, esp. if George is jealous and suspicious)??? Oh well, enjoyed it, and thanks!

So basically your male lead is an incestuous cuckolding blackmailer. Nice. In what way are we supposed to like him?

A good tale, love and hate and cheaters everywhere

So other than there parents who could you like in this tall tale. I hate you but I. Love fucking you as you two time a husband that I hate. So much fucking and hate to go around make for a tall tale.

ok

Gotta say, it wouldn't be worth a one if it wasn't so funny. I laughed the whole way through

you

this tale does not make you look very good or smart. The best revenge would
have been BTB and take both of the men with her. love or hate, hate works for me.

To previous anon . ..

. . . we are supposed to like him because SHE is such a foul and loathesome bitch!

I gotta wonder

if Hate sex is as hot as it is described in stories. I wanna read this from her POV now to understand why the hate towards her cousin.

Meh.....

Not much and then nothing.

Living up to your tag, you are indeed hapless.

Well that was just wrong

I tried to like him. Feel sorry for him. I always thought he should have done more to expose Amber to her parents - his other cousins would have been happy to help. But to have him let her get off scott-free while cheating on her husband and then fuck her himself was just too much. After that I hated him too!

Good story, but...

I really really enjoy love/hate stories, especially between relatives, but it would have been better if you had revealed why she hated Greg and then had the 'lust' aspect turn to love over time.

Nah leave it a mystery -

Hate is a very complex emotion and the love - hate - lust relationship they have is fascinating -

Nice :)

This is a somewhat silly but very hot story. I like it.

a group of foul mouthed, disrespectful, and unlikable people

No matter how hard I tried to like these characters, it kept getting harder and harder as the story progressed.

Totally hilarious tongue in cheek satire.

It is true as this story proclaimed, that love and hate coexist side by side. At least, I am in agreement. The author thoughtfully crafted this story to illustrate the frustration of unencumbered love.

hot and hilarious

I really would like to know why she hate(d) him so much.

Blah

"You don't like Amber, do you?" – What kind of a stupid question is that? He knows how he and Amber treat him, how could he possibly like her?

He should have outed her to George!

Not usually big on sequels, but this deserves one

When story concluded they were still trysting at molten lava intensity but still despised each other. This needs to go ' Taming of Shrew' path . Great scene there where the bitch gets broken down. Or maybe , just maybe not acording to Shakespeare's ending. Still this is great silly story on its,own- I thank the author for sharing.

Full marks. * * * * *

He really should have outed, or if not, I would like to see a continuation where the heated situation either completely combusts, or she gets tamed somehow into at least the semblance of decent human being, after all now she has a pretty good self-serving reason to be nice to him.