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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh908/02/13

Mein Gott en Himmel !!

You're spoutin' pure Aryan lingo , these days 1201 !!

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by Angeline08/03/13

I don't like the note in the middle of the poem or the separation

of what I read as a coda to a sonnet. I think it's a wonderful sonnet. The coda I like less but then I've never cared for Wagner either. But obviously it's a 5. The sonnet really is great. You should read Ted Berrigan's sonnets if you haven't yet.

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by twelveoone08/05/13

Surely Ash

you must have heard of Mary Shelley, not stolen from, but rather rewritten, and I'm glad to see you quickly reverted to comments of no substance.

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by Ashesh908/06/13

1201 , so this was inspired by

Frankenstein ?????!!!

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