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LMAO
Not my cup of tea, but you set this up with characters that don't make you want to immediately kill them to make the world a better place. Well done. Hard to pull off in my experience (as a reader).
Different
Interesting start. I'll refrain from rating until I read the final chapter. Please continue.
Another one!
Great story! Thanks for sharing.
Great story telling
Awaiting the rest with interest
That was so
much fun, the spanking helped me make a puddle. Think her friends need to be lined up for their share of spankings
Thanks for the entertainment DAMSEL approved
Tis' a pity; she's a bore !
This female lead character is a trainwreck with a twat. TexasTallTales is a skilled author and labors all too hard to give literary CPR with his talent. It's a lost cause. She's a hot lush with a cold deathwish.
I hope she gets her way so TTT can fixate on someone besides a heroine who's " this close" to doing an Amy Winehouse swandive into oblivion. At least Amy could sing her dysfunctions instead of communicating them in puerile babytalk.
Thanks for the effort.
Thanks
Drbeamer3333 you crack me up. Gotta love ya. I appreciate the effort on the comment. Even when you're not especially enthused, you still offer up a little thanks.
Believe it or not, even that little effort makes me smile.
I get it. This is a quirky little weird story inspired by real events. The girl in the supermarket, the accidental confusion. I didn't take her home, but I ran into the both of them later biking the neighborhood when they were in front of their house. She didn't even remember me, but he and I got a laugh about it. It had been her birthday, and she had gotten trashed with her friends the night before. And she was absolutely stunning.
That was enough inspiration to write this little story. Not my usual, but when the muse shouts in your ear, you do your best to obey.
The next chapter should post tonight. I submitted them back to back.
A lot of fun
This story was a lot of fun, especially since I admit I've mostly known your stuff in the past through your much harsher and darker loving wives tales. Thanks for the enjoyable read, I'll look forward to the second half.
A fun read
And I can already see a potential sequel in the works, for hubby's birthday.
Triple T
You are always entertaining, and, for me, score a five***** nearly every time. Am looking forward to the second chapter.
Do
Fiction
Since (most of) this is fiction, I am not worried a bit about Sweetie's rehabilitation. The story is delightful. I loved the Bull/Hero insight/experience about her Hen Buddies! Let them know they overstepped, but you are forgiving. However, you expect them to stay within established bounds!
Best wishes for the upcoming evening of the two luckiest men around! And may the Birfuffday Girl get totally worn out!
A TEASE?
OMFG!
You are masterful.
I love your stories.
that was fun
they sound to have a very strange marriage if they can do 'special' things for each others birthday....spanking her was good and telling her bitch friends off too....they knew they had overstepped the line but didn't give a fuck....they need to be taught a harsh lesson.....very different from the normal stories but a fun read....
Well let's see......
Bat shit crazy comes to mind.
Not a fan of swinging
But this is very entertaining and I absolutely love that your bad girls get spanked.
It rocks!
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