are unfortunately present but they do very little to detract from the power of this story.
A very unusual--and welcome--story for this website.
The author is to be congratulated.
A pleasure to see a story that goes outside the norm. I'm sure this happens in real life-we 'sighted' folks tend not to think about it though.
I can't give it a 5 because of the tenses and grammar, but certainly a solid 4. Also, maybe a bit more of Julia 'teaching' him about her body considering Sam has never seen (or touched?) a girl/women before.
A refresh of this story could certainly be a winner.
Outside of a few typos. A rather interesting concept. I've never read a story that involves someone who can't see and has to rely on their other senses.
Sweet and enjoyable. Thanks. Different folks don't get enough strokes. ;)
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Anonymous08/16/13
nice
It was a nice story even with the errors. I suggest you either check for any errors or get someone to edit it for you. Also you need to use more detail. I would be interested in seeing what happens next for Sam.
English
Nice, but copyeditor please.
Good story, sympathetically told. Irritating copy-editing weaknesses makes this less than satisfying, though. Please get a copyeditor.
A few minor errors
are unfortunately present but they do very little to detract from the power of this story.
A very unusual--and welcome--story for this website.
The author is to be congratulated.
Nice addition to the site
A pleasure to see a story that goes outside the norm. I'm sure this happens in real life-we 'sighted' folks tend not to think about it though.
I can't give it a 5 because of the tenses and grammar, but certainly a solid 4. Also, maybe a bit more of Julia 'teaching' him about her body considering Sam has never seen (or touched?) a girl/women before.
A refresh of this story could certainly be a winner.
Nice story
Outside of a few typos. A rather interesting concept. I've never read a story that involves someone who can't see and has to rely on their other senses.
TONS of errors - Get an editor!
I gave up after a few paragraphs, there were so many.
Sweet and enjoyable. Thanks. Different folks don't get enough strokes. ;)
nice
It was a nice story even with the errors. I suggest you either check for any errors or get someone to edit it for you. Also you need to use more detail. I would be interested in seeing what happens next for Sam.
a nice story
about a true blind date.
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