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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/11/13

Nice, but copyeditor please.

Good story, sympathetically told. Irritating copy-editing weaknesses makes this less than satisfying, though. Please get a copyeditor.

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by William smyth08/11/13

A few minor errors

are unfortunately present but they do very little to detract from the power of this story.
A very unusual--and welcome--story for this website.
The author is to be congratulated.

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by fixer4308/11/13

Nice addition to the site

A pleasure to see a story that goes outside the norm. I'm sure this happens in real life-we 'sighted' folks tend not to think about it though.
I can't give it a 5 because of the tenses and grammar, but certainly a solid 4. Also, maybe a bit more of Julia 'teaching' him about her body considering Sam has never seen (or touched?) a girl/women before.
A refresh of this story could certainly be a winner.

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by Mark73708/11/13

Nice story

Outside of a few typos. A rather interesting concept. I've never read a story that involves someone who can't see and has to rely on their other senses.

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by ReiDeBastos08/11/13

TONS of errors - Get an editor!

I gave up after a few paragraphs, there were so many.

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by FA_JF08/12/13

Sweet and enjoyable. Thanks. Different folks don't get enough strokes. ;)

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by Anonymous08/16/13

nice

It was a nice story even with the errors. I suggest you either check for any errors or get someone to edit it for you. Also you need to use more detail. I would be interested in seeing what happens next for Sam.

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by rightbank02/06/15

a nice story

about a true blind date.

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