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by sopharoones08/06/13

nothing wrong with build up

erotic stories should have build up! maybe its a girl thing...duno, i enjoyed that story and wld enjoy more. maybe his viewpoint to hers or something?

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by Anonymous08/06/13

Nice short story

Things like this do happen quite often. Nothing wrong with friends with benefits

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by Anonymous08/07/13

Nothing wrong with a bit of build up, BUT I think you went a bit over board, I almost gave up.

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by Erotonaut08/07/13

No need to apologise

I appreciate context.

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