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The Doctor Will See You Now

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/06/13

dove is a bird

i think you mean dived

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by tangentjoker08/06/13

Anonymous, it was dove rhyming with rove, not dove rhyming with love. Dove is correct.

Sorry about that. Interesting story. I was already nervous about what goes on in doctors' offices.... Wow.

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by Anonymous08/07/13

idiot

THERE IS NO WAY TO RIGHTLY USE THAT WORD UNLESS YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT A SUBMARINE

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by jolly_rogering08/07/13

Guys, no one's an idiot because of one word

The use of "dove" as a verb seems to be a regional thing, but generally acceptable:
http://www.merriam-webster.com/diction ary/dove

If it jarred you when reading it, I'm sorry about that. I hope you found something to like despite that.

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by pontiacwhite08/08/13

Stop the petty criticism

This is a well told short story with some hot sex (which is what this site is really about). "Dove" can be used as the past tense of dive. Please look it up instead of relying on your self righteousness. Don't let the tiny little things that annoy you sap the fun out of life. They will consume you. Thanks, Jolly.

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by Anonymous11/25/13

Dove is the past tense of dive...rhymes with cove and rove

This isn't a regional word, it's universal in the English speaking world. If you are going to have the balls to criticize someone for a story you haven't paid for, at least make sure you know what you are talking about....which you don't.

As for the story, it was good, I enjoyed it, and I didn't expect War and Peace, so I wasn't disappointed or unreasonably critical

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