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I knew a Lass - of Twenty-four

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by leBonhomme08/03/13

I know! 13 + 1 + 12 = ?!

I got my math wrong trying to rhyme: twentysix - rhymes with chicks, dicks, licks, tricks, kicks, . . .
Poetic license.

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by erectus12308/03/13

nicely erotic

I was confused as the age of the female and as to whether you had spent 24 hours with a 12 year old, apparently not? The last few words, "lapped and groaned" are a weak point in a pleasant exercise.

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by leBonhomme08/03/13

Erectus, the first line was suppose to be misleading, but I didn't have your imagination to interpret my incorrect numbers the way you did..

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by William smyth08/04/14

I doubt

Doubt if there is a better poem to be found on Literotica.
Well done my good man.

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