F2: Stranger In The Park

Great Story

Loved how this man brought hope to the little girl and allowed her to believe that her mama had not broken a promise even in death. Wonderfully written. I could read it over and over again.

5 STARS

I like it.

Really enjoyed this one, good job! what a great use of your basket.

Liked the simplicity of the story. The emotions were heartfelt and the ingredients were artfully employed.

Heartwarming

Very nice story. Good emotions, likable characters all around. Very well written.

Pretty good use of the required elements, although I wasn't quite sure how the fetish/fascination fit in. Other than that well done.

Easy 5 star for me.

Don't Care

I didn't really see the fetish/fascination (but maybe him being pulled back to the park was the fascination?) in this either, and I don't care a bit. The story was delicious and the other elements, particularly the location and then the toy, were integrated really well. The story had me plotting to use the same basic scenario for a story that did, in fact, have an erotic connection this one doesn't have (and that I'd normally discount a Literotica story for, but not this one)--and I can't think of a greater compliment to give it than that. (And it showed that you don't have to run up the page count to have a complete, excellent story.)

beautiful

I'm sorry I didn't get to this before the voting was turned off. I loved the simplicity, the connection and the hope that were built throughout. The basket contents were used well and the discovery that the harmonica had been his brought a tear to my eye. Thank you.

FAWC #2 WINNER!

This story, the winning entry of the second Friendly Anonymous Writing Challenge, was written by MistressLynn. Congratulations!