This is so far-fetched it's not even a fairy tale, just the author writing an unrealistic fable to cop-out of writing a realistic story conclusion; if the writer's block has descended, why on earth didn't the author just leave the story alone until the inspiration flowed again, instead of rushing out this 'and they all lived happily ever after, the end' garbage. Seriously not impressed.
what the hell would make you sell your house to live in an apartment? if this was the end it needs to be redone for more of a real rather than duh ending.
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Anonymous08/12/13
Of course it's fantasy. Please continue. Have Mom flash the friend, and then have son start sharing Mom with others. I love reading about submissive Moms being passed around and shared.
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Anonymous08/12/13
Where's the sex?
Okay, I get it, you have a fantasy. But this is not erotic without the sex. Have your fantasy on another site with PG-13 content. We should be getting XXX here. Sorry, to be critical, but the cock wants what the cock wants. It was a good idea with too little sex.
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Unrealistic cop-out...
This is so far-fetched it's not even a fairy tale, just the author writing an unrealistic fable to cop-out of writing a realistic story conclusion; if the writer's block has descended, why on earth didn't the author just leave the story alone until the inspiration flowed again, instead of rushing out this 'and they all lived happily ever after, the end' garbage. Seriously not impressed.
Waiting for next chapter
Need more chapters & longer.
what the hell would make you sell your house to live in an apartment? if this was the end it needs to be redone for more of a real rather than duh ending.
Of course it's fantasy. Please continue. Have Mom flash the friend, and then have son start sharing Mom with others. I love reading about submissive Moms being passed around and shared.
Where's the sex?
Okay, I get it, you have a fantasy. But this is not erotic without the sex. Have your fantasy on another site with PG-13 content. We should be getting XXX here. Sorry, to be critical, but the cock wants what the cock wants. It was a good idea with too little sex.
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