A Cold Dish Ch. 01

well i hope there will be a chapter two shortly

I hate cliffhangers. so I hope next chapter will be forth coming and it will be longer. thank you.

Good start

I think you have a good start here even if Rebecca is a little over the top. Write more soon. These two have the potential to have some really great angry sex. :)

I really like how this story starts ! Can't wait to see where this is going.

Hi, i loved it. when are you going to add more?

MMMn

This is GOOD! I love what is heating up! Please do more quick!!

Wow

Did NOT expect this to be this popular. Well, I have a draft of 2 in the works, but I'm not happy with it, so you're going to have to be patient!

chapt 2

hows the draft coming along? will we be seeing it soon? cool start

Chapter two is starting to be worked out. Between several moves, financial difficulties, and my computer committing seppeku, I've been all over the place. Hopefully this will be continued soon!

looking forward to chapter 2

please continue the story. It is a good start. would love to know what happens next

Like A Cold Dish, this can be a particularly Hot Story. Please continue

oh my gosh

Can't wait for second ch. It left me craving 4 more!!!!!